Posted 16 Feb 2008 · Report post Here is a re-write which I have formerly posted within my poems. I took the empty religion out and put man's filling achievements in.America, originally by Samuel F. SmithMy country, 'tis of thee,Sweet land of liberty,Of thee I sing.Land where my fathers' pride,Unbound in open stride,From every mountainsideMade freedom ring.My sovereign country, thee,Land of the noble free,Thy name I love.I love thy cities strong,Bright strings of lights among;High towers rise in silent songThrough clouds above.Now music proves the soulOf manhood's self-control---His reason's might.Now all our hearts abound,Each one partakes the sound,Stands rightfully upon the groundWith fearless sight.My Fathers' life, to thee,Rational Liberty,To thee I sing.Long shall my land be brightWith freedom's honest light;I guard thee day and nightIn everything.___________________________Brian Faulkner Share this post Link to post Share on other sites